Albarranator
Albarranator
Join date: Jun 2006
226 IQ
#1
Ok, I have been writing some songs and I belive this one is in the best. Also, I include formats in GP5 and MIDI, the lyrics are in inside the information of the score. Only the drums are missing. I will thank comments and suggestions.
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Star.zip
Last edited by Albarranator at Nov 20, 2006,
-Sidewinder-
Banned
Join date: Feb 2006
642 IQ
#3
Some of it kinda reminds me of No Leaf Clover by Metallica
It was pretty good though
JCShark
Registered User
Join date: Jan 2005
192 IQ
#4
"He's Simple, He's Dumb, He's The Pilot" by Grandaddy on album 'The Sophtware Slump'
The riffs in your song sound incredibly similar to the intro

I wonder if you've ever heard it...
Albarranator
Albarranator
Join date: Jun 2006
226 IQ
#5
Oh, really, I haven´t heard that song, I will do it as quick as posible, thanks for the crits
Telestar
UG Shewbie
Join date: Aug 2006
846 IQ
#6
Great stuff! I love all the sections titled "Riff". I dont know if anyone else hears it but some of the bass notes or something sound wrong (ie measure 46). I dont know if its supposed to be like that but it hurts my ears when i hear it. Anyway fantastic stuff! 8.5/10