Nunwhxre 666
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#1
Well, I've had this one for a LONG while. It was written way back in the day for my first band. Not really complicated. It's a punk song with simple leads. So yeahh.
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psychotim
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#2
It needs a little variation. its basicly the same 4 bars over and over again.
Other then that it was fine. I liked the verse.
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#3
Yeah, I'm not exactly proud of this song. This was written back in the day, earlier in the 2000's when I had first started guitar. I basically wrote a few bars and abused them throughout a song.
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#5
Taken for what it is, this is great. Catchy chord progression, nothing complicated about it, simple leads. And at least some variation in the power chords is nice, too. True, it's not as good as Dreams of Eternal Rest, but that's like comparing apples and oranges.
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#6
Thanks alto. I appreciate that. Actually looking beyond the simplicity of the song. I like that. =]
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#7
It was extremly simple. From what ive seen i expect more from you. But... I do appreciate your versatility and am extremly jealous
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#8
Incredibly simple, but that's everyone else said so that's not much help. Chord pattern sounded nice but elaboration would make it much better.
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#9
The intro is a catchy chord progression, and then the lead guitar comes in, which, as a lead guitarist, I don't like. But you are right, you played those chords out way too much. The end, you changed it up a bit (which is almost never a bad thing). 7/10 cuz its too repetitive.

Random note: The first two chords sound like Hell Song by Sum 41. Lol.

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#10
Yeah, I know. This is probably one of my worst, but back in the day when I wrote this I had only been playing a few months and I thought it was amazing. But, now I look back at it and realize it's actually pretty bad. But, I appreciate how everyone gave positive crits on this instead of bashing it because of how repititve and simple it is. This definitely shouldn't be compared to my other work...because like alto said, it'd be like comparing apples and oranges.
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