geRitseder esUr
Join date: Jul 2006
351 IQ
heres a song ive been workin on a while, the solo took a lot of work but i think it sounds decent

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Join date: Aug 2005
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nice!. yeah i thought the solo was great. one suggestion though would be to alter the intro with the piano, it would sound better if they weren't all quarter notes. overall 8/10 keep up the good work!

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