Marek99
Registered User
Join date: Apr 2006
174 IQ
#1
Hey guys,

this is metal song i made time ago...called Deep Inside, its wrote in C Spanish 8 tone scale . Hope you enjoy it. Comments & crits appreciated.
Attachments:
Deep_inside.zip
Buckethead5
UG Member
Join date: Nov 2006
564 IQ
#2
Genius melody, but you should have real instruments. then it would be perfect

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Marek99
Registered User
Join date: Apr 2006
174 IQ
#4
I will tab it out this weekend if you want..

the intro is simple: A#-F#-F...and so on, maybe you can figure the rest yourself

anyway, thanks for the comments guys
Hallows_Eve
Registered User
Join date: Oct 2006
443 IQ
#5
The riff about 2:30 into the song reminds me kinda of the main riff in "Horrorscope" - Overkill. Great song tho, built up very well, and the 2nd solo was like the high part of the song. That 2nd solo was amazing, except IMO that last ridiculously fast part at the end of the solo would be better with some string bends w/ vibrato instead.

8/10

Crit one of the songs in my sig if you get the chance.