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Join date: Mar 2005
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#3
thx for crit!

i've listened to both your songs and this is undoubtably the best!
the song has a nice flow(witch is something i have to get better at) and your are also alot better at writing solos then i am man!
if this song has a weakness it does get a little repetitive at times but nothing a vocalist couldant fix tho.

good work! i'd love to hear more from you!
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Join date: Oct 2006
765 IQ
#4
Another good piece of art, from a good artist, keep writing music you obviously have a talent for it........8/10 coz i prefered ur other song but this is a good second best..
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Join date: Oct 2006
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#5
Intro sounded very folk and I liked the harmony. I think there was too much solos though.
Again I have to say that I prefer heavier music more but this wasn't bad. I'll give it 7/10.
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