Fallenblood
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Join date: Oct 2006
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#1
This is my first song written in Guitar Pro. Quite good, I dare say. It's influenced a bit by Lacuna Coil's older stuff that I was listening to when I started writing it (first pard written 21:00 to 23:30 on a Thursday evening )

Last Update: 04.12.2006 - 20:56
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Last edited by Fallenblood at Dec 4, 2006,
Fatt Sorum
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Join date: Oct 2005
819 IQ
#2
I suppose that the start part is supposed to be feedback. i also suppose that you're not a drummer. The guitar sometimes clashes with the piano, but when it works, it sounds great. I like the interlude thing, and the slide part. It's interent how the piano acts like a lead guitar, props to you for that.

The timing in the solo is all over the place, I suggest that you fix that up, otherwise, not too bad, I hope it sounds better in person though.

Thanks for the crit.
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