tabs aint cats
not as dumb as my nick!
Join date: Mar 2005
597 IQ
#1
ok so here's my second song(I finished this about 2 months ago)!
it's a melodic metal kinda song with an acoustic part in the middle.
i've listened to this song so much during the process of writing it i cant really hear if it's good or not lol!

i'd be happy to crit any of your songs!

PS
if you like this song i've got one thats alot better coming...
Attachments:
song2.zip
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Fatt Sorum
UG's Resident Emo
Join date: Oct 2005
819 IQ
#2
Ok, It's well written, and you're a lot better than some people here when it comes to writing drum tracks. The guitar work does not disappoint, and there's lots of variation within the song.

I think you should choose a different interval to harmonise with however.

Overall, 8/10

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tabs aint cats
not as dumb as my nick!
Join date: Mar 2005
597 IQ
#3
oh yeah! when i listen to the harmonizing kinda sucks in this song (specially in the bridge) i'm alot better at it now.. cant wait to get my new song up here...
GEAR:
Epiphone special II
Ibanez RG570
Yamaha C-40
Roland Cube 30
ENGL Fucking Fireball
Framus 2x12 W/V30's


T3H HAMMER