Grovermans
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Join date: Jan 2004
2,846 IQ
#1
i started fingerpicking today and
i came up with this out of nowhere.
i thought it was pretty cool, so i just
added some more on to it and added
some strings and soft tremolo picking
in the interlude and some piano in the
outro and i ended up with this song.

it's probably pretty boring,
but i hope you guys enjoy it.
Attachments:
fingerpicking.zip

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Last edited by Grovermans at Dec 7, 2006,
hthedinga
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Join date: Nov 2005
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#2
yeah that was sweet. i listened to the whole thing. i tend to like your soft stuff more, so hopefully you'll do more of it. not really much to say other than i enjoyed this and was inspired by it.
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Join date: Aug 2006
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#3
That was awesome. Very calm and relaxing. This song is definitely better than your heavier song. That section with the tremelo picking was amazing, it gave me chills. Anyway, great stuff you have here. 9/10.

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Hallows_Eve
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Join date: Oct 2006
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#6
The interlude was killer The rest was really good, too, but the interlude alone counts 8 of the 8.5/10 I gave it. It is kinda repetitive, but just add vocals and no one would notice.

8.5/10

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Spark1284
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Join date: Feb 2004
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#8
it sounds great, but it feels like it needs more, and the picking patterns seem to be the same throughout, i dont think u were trying to compose a masterpiece or anything but i liked it
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#9
The verse and chorus got a bit old after a while, but the interlude was cool. I think maybe if you added some more strings to the rest of the song, like the interlude, it would be a bit more interesting. I did like the outro, too. That was a nice addition. Other than that, not bad. 6/10.

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