Sum41Freek
The Canadian Firecrotch
Join date: May 2006
98 IQ
#2
Pretty good, but needs to be longer (but its unfinished). I didn't really like the intro, and the drum fill at bar 7 doesnt suit the song. Bar 8 onwards sounds awesome, though. You should build on that riff. Good job.
guitarbreaker
Aeolian Flight Modulation
Join date: May 2005
854 IQ
#3
The riffs were alright, the drums coming I did not like at all, also don't do so much bass drum it gets really boring after awhile.