PopNFresh07
Knight in Shining Armor
Join date: Sep 2005
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#1
Right. So this is the first song I've tried to write. It's extremely generic and simple, nothing too fancy or even relatively fancy at all.

I've played with guitar pro before, so I atleast know my way around that a bit.

It doesn't have a name. For me, I'd say this is excellent. Its beyond what I expected it to be, so I'm extremely happy with it. Now, thats not saying its good... mm.

No solo yet.. Didn't have the time, I just wanted to see what some people thought.

I'm drummer or bassist, ftw. So if anyone has any suggestions for the drums/bass, I'd love to hear them. There's some parts that just sound silly (and you will notice them).

As for the guitars, there's a few parts I'm not really too happy with but I'll be able to change them on my own.
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SumFan98
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#2
It's a good idea for a song, but it's definitely not a song.
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PopNFresh07
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#3
Gotcha.

That's the way I felt, as well. Just similar riffs put one after another.

Any advice that'd help?
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#4
Umm. I will tweak it a bit and post it and you can use it. If you're lucky, I might write a solo for it.
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Oo that'd be much appriciated.

Thanks a lot dude.

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