MadMudgeN
Lets do this I'm a cashew
Join date: Sep 2003
1,716 IQ
#1
Hey all, been awhile since I've posted...

I don't really know what this is, but please Have at it. Crit 4 Crit as always. Enjoy.
Attachments:
For This I will Burn.zip
Washburn WI66 Pro E Celtic Cross (1 of 48!)
Washburn WI66 Pro Honeyburst
Takamine EG334SC Acoustic-Electric
Peavey XXX 120W All Tube Half Stack
Line6 MM4/FM4/DL4
Boss NS2
Vox Snakecharmer Compressor
Digitech XP100 Whammy Wah
Nunwhxre 666
You have ****ed up now!
Join date: Aug 2006
1,430 IQ
#2
I didn't really care for the Intro, Verse, and Bridge. But, I really enjoyed the Chorus. I thought that was really really good. Verse two was basically the same as verse one. But, after the chorus you had the harmonization which I thought was really good. THe build up was also good stuff. I dunno, I didn't care too much for the solo. But, the riff following the solo was good. It was a pretty decent song. I just didn't care for the clean guitar bits. 7/10

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gutsman
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Join date: Nov 2004
285 IQ
#3
great contrast. the intro almost made me fall asleep, but the chorus is really energetic. the next verse made me fall asleep for real though :/
Hallows_Eve
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Join date: Oct 2006
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#4
I actually thought the solo was pretty decent, not amazing, but not bad. The verse was ok, and the chorus was pretty good.

7/10. Maybe change some of the riffs a bit and it'd be better. Crit my prog. metal piece if you get the chance.
Burning_Angel
Valar Morghulis
Join date: Jun 2006
2,379 IQ
#6
Critting as I listen...

Intro I like. Its pretty catchy. Verse sounds awesome. Even though it contains the same riff as the Intro. Meh. Dont really care for the Bridge, but right after it was awesome. Rough transition back to the verse. Pretty cool. On second thought the Bridge is growing on me. Love the harmonization. Build up was pretty damn cool. And the riff after was cool. Solo sounded awesome. The riff after the solo was great.

Overall... 8/10. Nice. Reminded me somewhat of Katatonia. Awesome song.
MadMudgeN
Lets do this I'm a cashew
Join date: Sep 2003
1,716 IQ
#7
Sweet Glad some of you guys liked it... and Yea perhaps the intro should be more interesting, but I was going for a sort of "Pride" by damageplan thing, where I use some interesting effects; guess I should've mentioned that. I have a couple more that should be coming up soon, but thanks guys.
Washburn WI66 Pro E Celtic Cross (1 of 48!)
Washburn WI66 Pro Honeyburst
Takamine EG334SC Acoustic-Electric
Peavey XXX 120W All Tube Half Stack
Line6 MM4/FM4/DL4
Boss NS2
Vox Snakecharmer Compressor
Digitech XP100 Whammy Wah