¡Blah!
Banned
Join date: Nov 2006
72 IQ
#1
Only got up to verse but I wanna know what you guys think, and forgive my drums (I have hardly any knowledge of them considering I don't play them)
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Riffs.zip
Last edited by ¡Blah! at Dec 12, 2006,
Sum41Freek
The Canadian Firecrotch
Join date: May 2006
98 IQ
#2
I don't really like the intro, but I can't put my finger on what I don;t like about it for some reason. The Pre-Verse is pretty good, but you should have the drums stop when the guitar does. That way it doesn't feel like such an abrupt stop. And the tremelo picking doesn't sound very good. I like the verse, but add some variation in the first three bars of it. And I really didn't like the drums. But you're not a drummer (nor am I), so I'll leave them alone.

Good but needs some editing. Try bringing in a friend who likes this style of music (This isn't what I would listen to at my house). 6/10


EDIT: You may want to make a MIDI (File > Export > MIDI) for the people that don't have Guitar Pro 5. And thankx for critting mine.
Last edited by Sum41Freek at Dec 12, 2006,
¡Blah!
Banned
Join date: Nov 2006
72 IQ
#3
Quote by Sum41Freek
EDIT: You may want to make a MIDI (File > Export > MIDI) for the people that don't have Guitar Pro 5. And thankx for critting mine.


Just added MIDI and also thanks for the crit