Fatt Sorum
UG's Resident Emo
Join date: Oct 2005
819 IQ
#1
Yay, another song. Not a complete original, it was written in collaboration with the band, but meh.

This has more of a rock feel, but i love it just as much.

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aprescott_27
Friggatriskaidekaphobic
Join date: Nov 2004
859 IQ
#2
Meh, this one didn't hold my interest. I guess this was written for your band, so you have instrumentation constraints, but I didn't like the guitar solo with just the bass backing. It kind of lost the tonality. The chord progressions were good at first, but after listening to them for three and a half minutes, they're a bit bland. Sorry dude. 4/10.

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Hypetreme
The Black Mage
Join date: Oct 2006
997 IQ
#3
The riffs were boring and sounded too familiar. The solo was boring too. This song sounded Nirvana to me and I have never liked that band.
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TheDarkestNights
UG Addict
Join date: Oct 2005
3,034 IQ
#4
Well, I agree with the other people, the riffs did get a tad boring. For me, the intro was repeated too much, but not excessively, which is ok. The solo, IMO, was the best part of the song, not insanely fast, and it suited the song. A bit slow and sluggish for my taste, but I'm into more thrash stuff, so that's not really suprising. But back to topic, spice it up a bit and you've got something there.

6.5/10
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RedDeath9
UG's Nu/Shyguy
Join date: Aug 2006
3,129 IQ
#5
I don't know, I don't really like this one... The chord progressions were kind of boring, and some parts didn't really fit. The solo was alright, but other than that... Meh. This was not that great. 5/10.