baddewd
High Priest of Davism
Join date: Jan 2005
175 IQ
#1
Hey guys, just thought I'd post something I've been working on for my band recently, I just need some input. As typical, this is a C4C affair, just post your link if you want me to crit yours.

Thanks heaps.

-baddewd-
Attachments:
God of the Dead.zip
Quote by wahappen
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psychotim
Registered User
Join date: Sep 2006
975 IQ
#2
Ok.
The intro was good but you repet it to much.
And that bell section could have been good, but it just wasnt.
Then all your riffs after that are good, but in desperatly need for a bass.
baddewd
High Priest of Davism
Join date: Jan 2005
175 IQ
#3
Like I said, unfinished.

The bell section probably won't be used when we actually play the song, though, but thanks for the crit.

Also, I'm leaving the bass as it is for now, as my bass player is incredible, and likes to write his own bass parts to what suits him. Which of your songs do you want me to crit? There's quite a few there.
Quote by wahappen
No doubt.

Race ya to the FOTB...

Go!


I play guitar.
psychotim
Registered User
Join date: Sep 2006
975 IQ
#4
Harmonialisering and Melodic Acoustic Piece have i gottn good crits on.
And Evil Mother ****er just suck i guese.
But i havent gottn any crits on Something bad is too and Daim Thats Good At 03.11
So i would be happy if you could crit them.

Yeah it is unfinished, i forgot. Anyways, good work so far.
saddam
Carcass
Join date: Apr 2003
1,808 IQ
#5
pretty decent, though a little repetitive


grtz
riffmasta93
Registered User
Join date: Oct 2006
95 IQ
#6
everything before measure 22 was really horrible.
After that it was ok but too repetitive. Come up with some more variations.
You ask me "oh god why?"
'Cause im god thats fuckin why.
baddewd
High Priest of Davism
Join date: Jan 2005
175 IQ
#7
Thanks Mr. Eminem.

That wasn't very insightful and in depth, and this isn't progressive, so there's not much point for too much change.

Some of the greatest songs ever written are full of repitition, example, The Trooper.

But yeah, thanks for pointing out you know jack shit about music.
Quote by wahappen
No doubt.

Race ya to the FOTB...

Go!


I play guitar.