Saje
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Join date: Jan 2006
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#1
My first real composition...it's still kind of a WIP...and yeah I know the drums suck but I'm really bad at tabbing percussion...and some of the transitions need a little cleaning up but I'm working on it.


But yeah, crit for a crit.

EDIT: Should work now
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flyingjew34
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#2
Hmm, I can't open it...
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Saje
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Join date: Jan 2006
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#3
Fixed now
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sl1solo762
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#4
its all there and isnt bad for first i guess.. i HATE how it sounds, just Gpro in general when you dont have RSE on.... even with RSE its annoying as hell.. make a real track with some thick a-- distortion and it should sound pretty killer
I dont know...

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flyingjew34
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#5
It's ok. But it's a little boring honestly. You just need to keep working at it I suppose. You'll get it. The main riff was pretty cool, but the other licks just need to be faster IMO to sound good.
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Mongoose87
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Join date: Jun 2006
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#6
I like the Rythm guitar better if it's Overdriven, instead of distorted.
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D_y_p26
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#8
nice, i love the bass line
the intro is sorta cheesy too me, but very very good for your first real composition