-Sidewinder-
Banned
Join date: Feb 2006
642 IQ
#1
I decided to try somethin new, and make a slower kind of song. I usually go for metal stuff but I decided to give it a shot. Finished it today, have a listen. Everything is pretty basic.
Attachments:
Complete Slow Song.zip
Last edited by -Sidewinder- at Dec 16, 2006,
mattvl
Registered User
Join date: Dec 2006
297 IQ
#2
What type of player do you use for this kind of song...
Trebuchet
Registered User
Join date: May 2005
10 IQ
#3
I think it's good! Make sure you post the finished results too.
Sum41Freek
The Canadian Firecrotch
Join date: May 2006
98 IQ
#4
The intro sounds really good, almost reminds me of Pieces by Sum 41 for some reason. I don't really like the piano lead you wrote. The guitar solo is perfect for the song, but I don't like the sixteenth notes in bar 32. The pre-verse sounds cool, sombre and all that.

9/10. It jsut has these little nuisances that bug me. You've got an opprotunity for a lot of potential here, don't throw it away. This is DEFINATELY a step in the right direction.

Crit mine (in my sig)?
-Sidewinder-
Banned
Join date: Feb 2006
642 IQ
#5
THanks for the crit...just finished it today so you can listen to the complete song.
~DrEaM ThEaTeR~
Registered User
Join date: Jul 2006
726 IQ
#6
yea sounds alot like pieces by sum 41 (at least the rythmn guitar) sounds great tho, good solo guitar