§tratocaster
UG's #1 Procrastinater
Join date: Aug 2005
1,738 IQ
#2
nicely done.
i really liked the intro.
i didnt really like measures 20 to the end because im not a big fan of accidentals.
i would give it a 7/10 on what you have right now...

good job, and make sure to complete the song!

if you want you can crit mine (its the orange thing in the bottom of my sig)