Earang
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Join date: Mar 2006
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#2
loved the intro, then it gotten chaotic!
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#3
I liked it. snappy intro, good overall.
7/10 (cuz it's so short)
Burning_Angel
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#5


woah.

I kinda didnt like how prominent the bass was, but otherwise, awesome.
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Hallows_Eve
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#6
Quote by Burning_Angel


woah.


Err.. Do you mean that as in good or bad..?

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I kinda didnt like how prominent the bass was, but otherwise, awesome.


Yeah, trying to fix the bassline =S But how does that riff

And the reason some notes might sound wrong is because i switched from Diatonic Phrygian to it's harmonic minor parallel scale.

Spent a while on the intro, tho. Dunno if I should keep the heavier riff that comes after it..?
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MadMudgeN
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#7
First off, finish it It's pretty good, and anti- Burning Angel's comments, I really like how prominent the bass is in that second part. This sounds like something the Mars Volta would do... almost Good work. 8/10 so far. Crit Mine Please : http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=485226
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Burning_Angel
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#8
Quote by Hallows_Eve
Err.. Do you mean that as in good or bad..?


Yeah, trying to fix the bassline =S But how does that riff

And the reason some notes might sound wrong is because i switched from Diatonic Phrygian to it's harmonic minor parallel scale.

Spent a while on the intro, tho. Dunno if I should keep the heavier riff that comes after it..?


lol, its good. Quite good.

I dunno, I thought it all sounded pretty good.... i think you could go just about anywhere with it from here, if you do it right. xD

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Spark1284
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#9
this is really awesome, killer intro and i lovee the heavy part. but the rhythm is a little awkward, i think it would be coole with a straight swing feel. solid 8th notes would kill it it really does need to sound different but i think this is just a little off. excellent work- finish it!
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#10
I loved the heavier part, but i didn't care too much for the intro. Keep working on it, i'd love to see the finished version!

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