PunkFan99
the king of all rock
Join date: Dec 2006
21 IQ
#1
this is the first song i have written. i did it pretty quickly and i'm not sure about the solo. please give any comments, crits, or ideas. thanks!
Attachments:
A Letter to the World.zip
GiantRaven
UG Spammer
Join date: Apr 2004
1,301 IQ
#4
I like the eastern style vibe at the start

The synth is also nice

Drum/Bass seems lacking though

Your lyrics are...ok...I can't really comment on them

The main synth line is very nice though...


All in all, it's ok, without the Synth bits it wouldn't be very good though


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