Freunleven
Flying Monkey King
Join date: Jul 2004
1,714 IQ
#1
Yeah, great title, I know. I've put this piece together, basing it on a standard I-iv-V progression in B. I've got everything in place except the guitar solo, which I'm waiting for the guitarist to write once he gets back into town.

Any feedback or comments would be most appreciated.

Now, on to look over some other people's stuff . . . .

Attachments:
bluesey.zip
rock_and_blues
Banned
Join date: Feb 2006
892 IQ
#2
ummmm the only thing really bluesy about this is the 12 bar progression....but you did say hyprid so i geuss itll slide, id like to hear how the solo plays out.
Freunleven
Flying Monkey King
Join date: Jul 2004
1,714 IQ
#3
Well, we tend to start all of our practices with a 12-bar blues jam, so I'm trying to adapt that into the start of a song. I'd like to hear how the solo plays out, too, if the farking nerf herder would ever answer my e-mails.

And2001PT
Banned
Join date: Aug 2004
224 IQ
#4
Boring.
Try to build a decent rhythym before writing the solo.
And by decent rhythym, I don't mean straight quarter notes all the way.