Crystoph
Registered User
Join date: Dec 2005
42 IQ
#1
This is a song ive made with lots of inspiration ranging from CoB to Led Zeppelin.
Played it for my guitar teacher, and he liked it. So please crit.
Attachments:
Song.zip
Please let me know if you have a good bandname
onebetter
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Join date: Aug 2006
1,268 IQ
#2
dude, that was awesome! The the only the problem I had was measure 10. It went from sounding mellow and suspenseful to frolic throught the flowers happy then back again. If I were you I would just delete measure 10, but thats just me and it might sound good to anybody else. I really liked the CoB part and the strings really fit and made it sound epic. I failed to see any zeppelin influence in it, however. 10/10
Hypetreme
The Black Mage
Join date: Oct 2006
997 IQ
#3
I liked it a lot. The riff sounded good and it doesn't look easy though :P Be sure to check rhythm guitar again, because it sounded little weird under the riff. Was this song incomplete? There would be more riffs, ecspesially in the harp section. Good work.

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Schecter Hellraiser C-1
ENGL Thunder 50 E322
Framus 2x12 Cab
Yamaha HS50M


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Crystoph
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Join date: Dec 2005
42 IQ
#5
No its not complete, it needs a lot of stuff like, i must think if it should just be instrumental, or if i have to write lyrics. And i probably need to a convert the break and the verse so that it doesnt sound like CoB as much as it does.
Please let me know if you have a good bandname
Last edited by Crystoph at Dec 20, 2006,