Crystoph
Registered User
Join date: Dec 2005
42 IQ
#2
Not bad, though i would recommend just playing basic chords in the rhythm of the solo. And it sounds excactly like Arch Enemy which i think is a good thing.
8/10 and its not pitiful.
Please let me know if you have a good bandname
grampastumpy
Not actually old.
Join date: Jul 2005
1,206 IQ
#4
Definitely have been listening to them too much recently(Necrophagist). Thanks Crystoph.
TheDarkestNights
UG Addict
Join date: Oct 2005
3,034 IQ
#5
Hmm, it's a bit, all over. I like parts of it, but it sounds too much like different riffs/licks just thrown together. But there are some good ideas in there, maybe pick one and work it into a different piece? Definately not pitiful.

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R E G G A E
Horvat
Gravis Metallus
Join date: Jun 2005
458 IQ
#6
It's definitely okay. Not pitiful at all. But like the other dude said, it does sound a bit too much like Necrophagist.