Misfits1234
heh heh, boobs
Join date: Dec 2006
332 IQ
#1
Its to go along with my lyrics from a song I call "family tree"

It's basically a punk song / beat so just keep that in mind.

so having said that, please, criticize. (my first whole written song)

Riff
|D---------------------------|
|A-5-55-8-88-5-55-9-99|
|E-3-33-6-66-3-33-7-77|


Chorus Part 1
|D-77777777-55555555-77777777-33333333|
|A-55555555-33333333-55555555-11111111|
|E-------------------------------------------------------|

Chorus Part 2
|D-77777777-55555555-77777777-33333333--------|
|A-55555555-33333333-55555555-11111111-2-4-2|
|E-------------------------------------------------------------0-2-0|


Filler 1
|D---------------|
|A-5555-8888|
|E-3333-6666|

Filler 2
|D----------------8-8|
|A-5555-8888-6-6|
|E-3333-6666-----|


SOLO
|e-----------|
|B-2-5-2-5-|
|G-----------| 4x then

|e-----6-9-6------------------|
|B-6-9-------9-6-------------|
|G---------------9-6-h9b-6--|
|D----------------------------9|
|A------------------------------|
|E------------------------------|
-
Outro
|D----------------8-8-8-8-8-8-8------------------------------|
|A-5555-8888-5555-6-6-6-6-6-6-6-5--------------------|
|E-3333-6666-3333---------------3---3-h5-3-h5b\3p-0|


ORDER:

Filler 1 2x
Riff 6x
Chorus 4x
Filler 1 4x
Riff 4x
Chorus 4x
Solo 1x
Filler 1 6x
Chorus 2x
Filler 2 1x
Outro 1x
Gibson SG
HSS Fender starcaster
Crate XT120
BiG Muff (russian)
FAB chorus and echo
CB 700 drum set
Last edited by Misfits1234 at Dec 23, 2006,
hardcoreatheist
Slag
Join date: May 2005
175 IQ
#3
Bearing in mind that it's punk that's pretty decent. Fairly catchy, nice and simple, a great punk type song.
21st Century Digital Boy
Misfits1234
heh heh, boobs
Join date: Dec 2006
332 IQ
#4
Quote by Albarranator
Well maybe if you can put that in Power or Gutitar Pro Tab, I could make a good crit of your work


ok, I'll get it all done tomorrow
Gibson SG
HSS Fender starcaster
Crate XT120
BiG Muff (russian)
FAB chorus and echo
CB 700 drum set
Misfits1234
heh heh, boobs
Join date: Dec 2006
332 IQ
#5
Quote by hardcoreatheist
Bearing in mind that it's punk that's pretty decent. Fairly catchy, nice and simple, a great punk type song.



thanks dude
Gibson SG
HSS Fender starcaster
Crate XT120
BiG Muff (russian)
FAB chorus and echo
CB 700 drum set