hardcoreatheist
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Join date: May 2005
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#1
Something I wrote for my old band a while back. They really liked it, just thought I'd see what other people think. Thanks in advance.
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Balance of Power.zip
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rustic_metal
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Join date: Mar 2006
120 IQ
#2
this is pretty good. only thing id say is the rests near the start are a bit long...

is it just me or does verse one sound alot like a folk song?
hardcoreatheist
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Join date: May 2005
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#3
hahaha never looked at it like that...my old band thought the verses sounded like something off final fantasy. Wasn't my intention but, nm.
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Stobbeez
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Join date: Aug 2006
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#5
I thought it was really cool, and I liked the different 'themes' I guess you could say.. starting at around verse 3, and it sort of went back to the original theme of the song eventually. Nice work.
vonfeldt7
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Join date: Dec 2006
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#6
i liked it all, except for the part where it made me feel like the songs i write suck..

nice job
NovemberRain273
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#7
Its pretty good, youve got a lot of cool harmonies and riff ideas, though it kinda bored me at times. I think it was the drums. They cant be just ffollowing the beat of the guitars, or else there wont be any real difference between them.
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hardcoreatheist
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Join date: May 2005
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#8
Thanks NovemberRain273, I'll work on that.

I was also thinking maybe I should streamline it a bit. Get rid of some bits that aren't really necessary, like cut down the verses a bit.
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Last edited by hardcoreatheist at Dec 24, 2006,