Chaperoni
Registered User
Join date: Dec 2006
840 IQ
#1
Here's some odd thing I made up over a while. Contains a few different sections, and most of you won't like it at all.

It's called Blah because I'm no good at making names.

Enjoy (or don't).
Attachments:
blah.zip
hardcoreatheist
Slag
Join date: May 2005
175 IQ
#2
hm..well..where to start? Some bits sound like the (even) wierder side of early Marilyn Manson...other bits are just completely fecked up. The Chorus actually sounds like you've just strung some notes together at random. It just feels altogether sloppy.
21st Century Digital Boy
Chaperoni
Registered User
Join date: Dec 2006
840 IQ
#3
I suppose I didn't excpect any good comments at all, ever, but Marilyn Manson? Tell me how I can change my ways! :P

Also I expected people to latch onto the "solos" as the randomly strung together notes, as I am just... yeah at those. Altogether sloppy I can take, because I have no sense of continuation. Or whatever that word is supposed to be.
Ryioku
UG Senior Member
Join date: Jul 2006
1,294 IQ
#4
I actually really love the verse riff... but other than that, its not doing it for me... hard to listen to because mainly, as you said with your continuity errors, none of it works together.

but again, that verse riff is really cool, methinks
Philipp Sobecki
Derjayger
Join date: Aug 2006
625 IQ
#5
Wow, I love that!
Lets see... The slap bass and the electric snares are pure love. And the other stuff, too. But I'd reduce the random notes. Try to evoke the feeling with something that is more... pleasant? Dunno ^^ Good luck with this one
^ seconded.

Äh, Sie wollen also mit Schlitz.