Roxxin Biatch
rung gugga gung gung.
Join date: Jun 2004
217 IQ
#1
Hello UG. This is the first rock song I've written in a fairly long time, written in MIDI on TabIt. I reckon it's almost finished. Maybe your crit could help me to finish it?

Cheers people.
Attachments:
Culmination.zip
f12button
Registered User
Join date: Dec 2006
233 IQ
#3
Wow. It does remind me a lot of Avenged Sevenfold.

I like it a lot. Especially the little fills you've got going on after every major part. Drums also fit the song well.

The only thing i think is wrong with it? It's a little long...

The part with the (i think) Jazz guitar, seems like it would be the interlude, i like that part. Great guitar work, not only on that, but the whole song.

If you'd like, crit mine?
Inspired_by_Vai
Les Paul Fanboy
Join date: Mar 2006
681 IQ
#4
Wow, this is one of the best things iv heard in a while. Does remind me a lot of A7x though

LOVE the way you used the synths and the piano, especially in the chorus, it really added some nice texture to the song. Chorus was my favourite part

Crit my idea? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=492838

New tracks on my profile! Please check them out and see what you think!
GiantRaven
UG Spammer
Join date: Apr 2004
1,301 IQ
#8
man, I love the lil keyboard bits in the intro (well, sounds like a keyboard)

This is sounding very good, agree with the Avenged Sevenfold comments

All I can say is this is a very good song