dormob
Registered User
Join date: Sep 2006
155 IQ
#1
Ive been playing for a year and yes I know the solo sucks but besides that what do u think?
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Last edited by dormob at Dec 29, 2006,
vIsIbleNoIsE
The Asian-Viking Paradox
Join date: Feb 2006
1,543 IQ
#2
the beginning was interesting

then when more of the rhythm came in it started sounding like some bad notes were put in or something

the part when guitar1 goes in with the palm muting, that was pretty cool too

good ideas in there
FlippinPeteeVee
Master Shake
Join date: Dec 2005
47 IQ
#5
yeah dude, the song isnt played in E
so dont use the open e in the over driven as a constant bass
try and work around the main guitar rather than make cool parts for everything.
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trem7
UG Member
Join date: Dec 2006
577 IQ
#6
Pretty good, the solo could use some work but it's not bad for only playing a year, some notes didn't seem to fit but nice idea.