trem7
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Join date: Dec 2006
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#1
This is a PT file of a song called revolver, I just want some feedback. The bass isn't finished, I tried to write something interesting for my friend to play but I'm not a bassist.

Added Midi File
Attachments:
revolver.zip
Last edited by trem7 at Dec 29, 2006,
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#2
could you post a MIDI?
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#3
hmmm, why does everyone seem to post metal songs here? any how, it was good. the verse was a pretty simple chord progression with some extra stuff to make it sound better. the lead chorus part made me think of Avenged sevenfold. but it sounded alrgiht also. the solo was pretty Crazy man. Pretty crazy
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#4
It's good. The part that starts at 0.39 is great. The riff at 1.19 is also very good and from there
is's basically just great. The verse riff is pretty predicteble tho. Dont work more with this song tho, take what you've learnt and write another song instead.

let me know what you think about my latest song
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GiantRaven
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#5
I like the intro

In fact, I like the whole song a lot. It may be predictable but it still sounds good
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#6
Quote by Alternate_rock
hmmm, why does everyone seem to post metal songs here? any how, it was good. the verse was a pretty simple chord progression with some extra stuff to make it sound better. the lead chorus part made me think of Avenged sevenfold. but it sounded alrgiht also. the solo was pretty Crazy man. Pretty crazy


Whats the matter with metal songs, even though this is more of a metalcore song

Anywho i like the opening riffs there cool, and the little leads are great, and yes it does remind me of avenged seveonfold aswell, the solo was great, and so where the riffs following

I like it 8/10
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RPotts
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#7
Ass, you ended on the D, which is the 7 of the mode it's in. No conclusion, theoretically you should've gone up one more step to the E.
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