Alternate_rock
I fly like paper
Join date: Jun 2005
607 IQ
#1
Me and my friend made this song a while ago i posted to lyrics in the songwriting thread along time ago too. it was named different then. i think it was like Love life for something something. Its not completely finished and its very simple.
Attachments:
Raise your glass.zip
Last edited by Alternate_rock at Dec 30, 2006,
KeViNp
Fish On The Sidewalk
Join date: Jun 2006
437 IQ
#2
I can't seem to open it
Last edited by KeViNp at Dec 30, 2006,
Nunwhxre 666
You have ****ed up now!
Join date: Aug 2006
1,430 IQ
#4
It is simple. But it's very catchy. 7/10. Pretty good work.

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Pyro21
Registered User
Join date: Jul 2006
21 IQ
#7
love the piano, and i agree needs some guitar
Cyclones41
this too shall pass
Join date: Jul 2006
1,134 IQ
#8
well i think it's pretty good. i really like in the middle when the guitar comes in. It'll be a lot better once you get the lyrics to it too. get more of that guitar in there and it'll be good. piano sounds great! did kellen play the piano in that? the lyrics are awesome! btw thanks for the crit
l3fty_g3n1u5_89
gootd
Join date: Sep 2006
192 IQ
#12
i liked it. those guys were right though. It nedds more guitar.
7.5/10
man.....fuck you guys