Liam Efting
The Wiz
Join date: Dec 2006
87 IQ
#1
Hey guys, I worked this out a few months ago and I figured maybe I should let you guys see it, let me hear what you think.

It's not your basic song by any means, lots of wierd structure, lots of intricate leads at one point. I basically wrote this track as a means for me to practice playing untraditional song structures.

http://www.hyperguy.net/billefting/Guitar%20Instruction%20and%20Stuff/Temptation%20of%20the%20Rose.gp5

I hope you enjoy it, and leave me feedback. Delicious feedback.
varga88
Varga
Join date: Feb 2006
50 IQ
#2
Hey i really liked this
I am Cool Thanks for listening.
GiantRaven
UG Spammer
Join date: Apr 2004
1,301 IQ
#3
I swear you ripped of 007 for the keyboards at the start Is nice though

The main theme/verse seems way too repetitive

The transition from Chorus to Bridge is too sudden me thinks

The leads sound great
~DrEaM ThEaTeR~
Registered User
Join date: Jul 2006
726 IQ
#4
haha no doubt about the similarities to 007 on the keyboard, but overall a pretty cool song
Naeroon
Johnny Jr.
Join date: Jan 2006
111 IQ
#5
Wow, thats really nice! It all sounded pretty rad to me, and those were some pretty wicked solos :P
Liam Efting
The Wiz
Join date: Dec 2006
87 IQ
#6
Interestingly enough, I was contacted by someone who wants to use this song in thier band. lol. I was flattered, to say the least, now THATS good feedback.
NOTE: I will crit your songs back, I'm Dial up, be patient.