trem7
UG Member
Join date: Dec 2006
577 IQ
#1
This is a song I wrote for an english project, it's very inspired by a Tenacious D song but still different. Any comments would be appreciated.
Attachments:
A_c_Slater.zip
psychotim
Registered User
Join date: Sep 2006
975 IQ
#2
Ok its probebly a ok song if you got some lyrics to it or add a lead guitar.
But now its to repetitive and boring without no lead or vocal.
And i dont realy like the lead you got at the end, you repeat it to much, make some variation.
Zar Mulix
Wannabe Bum
Join date: Aug 2006
102 IQ
#3
if it was a shorter song it would be ok but it gets very repetitive. Try adding an interesting bass line, or changing up the seocnd guitar a little, it kind of mirrors the first guitar, make it variate a little and add a little life into the song.
Nunwhxre 666
You have ****ed up now!
Join date: Aug 2006
1,430 IQ
#5
It was very repetitive but I thought it was reall catchy so it kept my attention. I also like the leads in the last 2 choruses. So, overall decent song. 7/10.


P.S. Cheers on having a good PTAB score. Added chord names, and no score checker errors and a use of key sigs. Just felt I should point that out. Lol.

Crit one of mine if you get a chance? Links in sig.
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