Pyro21
Registered User
Join date: Jul 2006
21 IQ
#2
nice song, drums work very well with the piano and the piano is awesome
GiantRaven
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Join date: Apr 2004
1,301 IQ
#3
The way you're doing the bars is odd, I think you're doing something wrong with the time sig

I'm pretty sure this should be in 3/4 if it's to be written correctly. Theres nothing wrong with how it sounds, it's just a bit weird to look at
Cyclones41
this too shall pass
Join date: Jul 2006
1,134 IQ
#4
it's good, maybe a bit repetitive. the drums go very well with it. during that time with all the cymbals it might want to be a little shorter. overall good job