Snipy
Metalhead
Join date: Aug 2006
392 IQ
#1
Hi ppl, this is my new song that i composed for my band.
C4C, and obviously I'll crit yours
Attachments:
Song.zip
ctb
Join date: Apr 2004
1,449 IQ
#2
That was nice to listen too and the solo worked really well with the song. 9/10
ubernooblet06
Registered User
Join date: Dec 2006
142 IQ
#3
good, but on the last note of each bar, something isn't right about the note. change that note to something that compliments it really well and it will be really good. other than that it seems awesome.
Snipy
Metalhead
Join date: Aug 2006
392 IQ
#4
Quote by ubernooblet06
good, but on the last note of each bar, something isn't right about the note. change that note to something that compliments it really well and it will be really good. other than that it seems awesome.

Which bars?
Docaroo
Registered User
Join date: Feb 2007
134 IQ
#5
hey that's pretty cool stuff! the intro is very cool nice work!
noodlenick
Registered User
Join date: Jan 2007
171 IQ
#6
I think this song is really catchy and I love the ringing intro part. I thought it was great! My only critism is the drums, they worked really well but the wasnt any bass drum which I would think would give it a bit more. 9/10.

Crit mine: Here
Snipy
Metalhead
Join date: Aug 2006
392 IQ
#7
Quote by noodlenick
I think this song is really catchy and I love the ringing intro part. I thought it was great! My only critism is the drums, they worked really well but the wasnt any bass drum which I would think would give it a bit more. 9/10.

Crit mine: Here

Thanks for the crit, I'll tell our drummer to fix the drums part.
CaptainOfSmug
Morbid Mushroom
Join date: Oct 2006
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#8
I liked it. Not exactly my type of music but still good. I like the solo in it too. Overall 9/10

Crit my song? In my sig
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Ozy44
I lol'd
Join date: Nov 2006
133 IQ
#9
I like this. The verses have this nice fast pumping action to them which made it a real foot tapper.

I wasn't too keen on the intro because it seemed a little weak but I think it got better from the start of the verse.

I really like the harmonising in the "terza" and the outro, nice decending riff and well harmonised.

Overall good piece 8/10

Crit mine? http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=518104
Snipy
Metalhead
Join date: Aug 2006
392 IQ
#10
Quote by Ozy44
I like this. The verses have this nice fast pumping action to them which made it a real foot tapper.

I wasn't too keen on the intro because it seemed a little weak but I think it got better from the start of the verse.

I really like the harmonising in the "terza" and the outro, nice decending riff and well harmonised.

Overall good piece 8/10

Crit mine? http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=518104

Yes, everytime I play this song, I tap my foot on the ground
Thanks for the crit!
RavenKlown
Registered User
Join date: Dec 2006
349 IQ
#11
I liked it...The intro sorta had a blink 182 feel too it, but then you really broke it down, I liekd it worked well...

The solo was great.
The only part I didnt like was the whole drum break after the solo...wasnt bad...but it was lakcing...tell your drummer to listen to frakenstien by edgar winter...it'll help him with drum breaks...

heres my song https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=586722

now warning its only me playing guitar...so yeah...

I've only been playing for 6 months so yeah
Gunjak
Registered User
Join date: Mar 2007
63 IQ
#12
that was awesome. I wish i wrote write this song
piquet
repetitive repetitive
Join date: Jan 2006
781 IQ
#13
The intro sounded for an epic song - Zeppelin's Battle of Evermore or Metallica's Fade to Black, and then it was short of three minutes?! This song was too good to be that short.

When you broke into the main rhythm, it reminded me almost too much of Iron Maiden's Run to the Hills. It wasn't the "exact" same, but same galloping rhythm and a similar progression; but you did counter it nicely with the breakdown.

The drums have already been touched, so I won't go there again.

The solo was another one of those ones that I wish I could play. I'm a stupid lefty playing right, so speed isn't my friend. ..Lucky... :P

I loved the harmonization in it - not overdone, which when you've got something that sounds as cool as harmonization, it's hard not to abuse it. ..Anyways, I think that's all I had.

Would you mind checking mine out? Thanks. http://w9.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=704029
Snipy
Metalhead
Join date: Aug 2006
392 IQ
#14
Thanks for the crit guys!
@Gunjak: it's not so hard... keep practicing with gp. You'll write better songs .