AdamDK
Meh.
Join date: Jul 2006
2,296 IQ
#1
Hey guys, I've decided I'm going to make a solo album, well of Guitar Pro files of music I will create. This is my first track - TIRO (Time is Running Out). ALl comments welcomed. Constructive Criticism please, no flaming!

And Enjoy

Donkey Kong Edit: Haven't added drums in yet since it is work in progress. Also, I wanted this to be a short song, hence the name 'Time is Running Out'.

Edit 2: I will probably add in another chorus and vere, this is just a basis.
Attachments:
Time is Running Out (GP5).zip
Last edited by AdamDK at Jan 4, 2007,
ctb
Join date: Apr 2004
1,449 IQ
#2
Woah that so interesting, it sounds like a fiddle and I love the rhythm of it too.
AdamDK
Meh.
Join date: Jul 2006
2,296 IQ
#3
:P Thanks. Anybody else wanna see what it's like?

Oh and ctb I'll crit your Metalcore song.

SForbz-Rockstar
Sean3h™
Join date: Dec 2004
538 IQ
#4
Ha, catchy. Reminds me of Bumblefoot. Uhh, not much to fault to be honest. The bass could be a little more adventurous, instead of just following the guitar. In all honestly though what you have thus far is very good and catchy. Looking forward to a final product.

Crit for crit? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=498339 Ta.
AdamDK
Meh.
Join date: Jul 2006
2,296 IQ
#5
Thnks for the comments SForbz. I've critted yours. ANybody else want to crit mine?
ShadowintheSun
UG's Thrash Metal Fanatic
Join date: Nov 2006
335 IQ
#6
It's not bad
it's different to say the least
not too keen on the pre-chorus but once u've finished it, u'll have something good there.

6/10