#2
it needs a lot of work. your timing is off in a lot of places, and the intro is really sloppy. keep practicing though, it's a hard song if you've only been playing 6 months
#3
um...was it really necessary to go over the neck for those harmonics, no offense, it just looked like you were trying to look good or something, when it was kinda sloppy all around. But enough with me being an ass, really good job for only 6 months, I was surprised how good some of the pinch harmonics were.
#4
good job that youv only been playing for 6 monthes so keep it up!