I'm not done with this yet but i thought i would post it before i went to bed. This is a soft pretty piano song. I will probably have it recorded by this weekend for anyone who would like to hear it completed. Any comments are welcome and encouraged. Thanks crit for crit

unto us all
theres a love for the taking
there is joy in the thought
that a love is mine

lies settle in
and im trying not to forget
all the truth ive been told
and what i believe in

its hard to stand out
when i'm stuck in the crowd
theres a path in this world
given time and ill find my way