#1
I'm not done with this yet but i thought i would post it before i went to bed. This is a soft pretty piano song. I will probably have it recorded by this weekend for anyone who would like to hear it completed. Any comments are welcome and encouraged. Thanks crit for crit

Verse:
unto us all
theres a love for the taking
there is joy in the thought
that a love is mine

Verse:
lies settle in
and im trying not to forget
all the truth ive been told
and what i believe in

Chorus:
its hard to stand out
when i'm stuck in the crowd
theres a path in this world
given time and ill find my way