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Ok, this is a new song I have written. If you crit it, I will crit yours. Hope you guys like it.


That Girl

Verse

I don't really care what your name is,
I don't really care where you're from.
I don't really care what you think of me,
I don't really care if you're right or wrong.

I don't really care who you're friends with,
I don't really care how speak.
But all I know is that I've got a feeling,
Deep inside of me.


Chorus:

You'll never hear me say it,
Unless I'm talking in my sleep.
That's if I ever get some,
Well I better count some sheep.

Although I'll never get the chance,
To give you some of my time.
The image of you will be stuck in,
My head for a lifetime.


Verse:

I don't really care what the time is,
I don't really care if it's right.
I don't really care what the place is,
I don't really care if it's day or night.

I don't really care if you see me,
With my eyes wide with awe.
You will be stuck in my head,
Forever, maybe more.


Chorus:

You'll never hear me say it,
Unless I'm talking in my sleep.
That's if I ever get some,
Well I better count some sheep.

Although I'll never get the chance,
To give you some of my time.
The image of you will be stuck in,
My head for a lifetime.


*Guitar solo, instrumental*


Chorus:

You'll never hear me say it,
Unless I'm talking in my sleep.
That's if I ever get some,
Well I better count some sheep.

Although I'll never get the chance,
To give you some of my time.
The image of you will be stuck in,
My head for a lifetime.


And you'll never hear me say it.
...
'Cause I'll never get to tell you.
....
'Cause I'll never get to hold you.
...
At all.

I'll never get to hold you at all.


Please crit, I will crit back.