#1
I wrote these some time ago under a different title, i changed it to The Reaper. Please tell me what you think of this song. Kinda Iron Maiden/Sabbath/Metallica inspired.
The Reaper

Verse I
Flashes rolling across the sky
Streaks of fury light up the night
Desperate screams pierce through the air
Darkness engulfs those roaming about
You better run and save yourself
The Reaper roams the deadly streets

Chorus
The Reaper looking for victims!
The Reaper looking for vengeance
The Reaper looking for sinners
The Reaper is looking for you!

Ohh..yeah….

Verse II
He’s a mystery, hiding behind a cloak
No one knows if he’s man or beast
He hates mankind and all its evils
He has his own laws he has his own ways
He is the jury; he is the judge, and the executioner

Chorus
The Reaper looking for victims
The Reaper looking for vengeance
The Reaper looking for sinners
The Reaper looking for you!

Bridge
The Reaper!
(Laughs)

Guitar solo #1

Verse III
Cry out for help, beg for mercy
He has found you at last. Now is your time
Say goodbye to the world you live in
He has come for you

Chorus
The Reaper looking for victims
The Reaper looking for vengeance
The Reaper looking for sinners
The Reaper looking for you!

Bridge

The Reaper is coming for you!
(Drag out)

Guitar solo # 2

Outro
#2
Unless, I'm having some sort of complete brain-deadyness...shouldn't it be The Reaper's looking for victims, The Reaper is looking for victims, etc? There should be an s of some sort...