#1
i only need to write the opening, but has anyone go any suggestions on what to do it on? not too stupid please........
#3
A concert. I don't know. Choose anything.
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#5
you wake up and you're in a totally white room with 10 other people, and the number 11 tatooed on your forehead. i started my standard grade (gcse) english paper with that, and got a A
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#6
Why don't you choose a topic that actually means something to you? Look in the news for current events and stuff like that, you'll find something. If you find something you like, but can't write a story with it, use a metaphor to portray the meaning.
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#7
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Why don't you choose a topic that actually means something to you? Look in the news for current events and stuff like that, you'll find something. If you find something you like, but can't write a story with it, use a metaphor to portray the meaning.


+ 1 .

try not to do anything clichéd, in my experience its best to do something that seems weird until the end, where there's a clever twist and it becomes apparent that the whole thing has been a mind ****. if you can pull it off, it'll always impress the examiner because it shows some level of planning.
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#8
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