#1
As we talked for hours on end
I used to deny my love for her
as though the truth was too hard to bear
but after singing out too all
and your smiling face
my heart does tear
I realised I kid my self
and now our speech ends right there
perhaps she feels the same way
oh forget those diabolic thoughts and maybes
her love is for another
and I am not envious
as I love him too as a friend
and break from that
pain i cannot comprehend

Michael Ward


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#3
Uh... So you like this person, but you deny it in yourself. And she likes this friend of yours, and you don't care. So what's your beef? :I
#4
Not bad, but not at all interesting. Not everything can have a poem written about it, if you find something interesting to write about, then at least using interesting words and/or rhymes. I think you made a good effort, but when all is said and done, the poem is pretty boring.