#1
Aight so i made a song a long long time ago that i called The Hoarde because i thought it sounded cool. Three years later im slapping some lyrics on it. Most parts have a steady beat but the "bridge" (Lock Up...) has the kinda rythmic pattern as the bridge to Dig ("let me help you to...")


Serve the Queen!
All hail the blasphemy!
Serve the Queen!
Set the stones in the path of heresy
Serve the Queen!
May you fall beneath us!
Serve!

They come from the badlands of the unknown
They tear down the statues upon high
They desecrate all known holy
They draw blood from the Sky

Serve
The
Queen
Save Yourself!

Blades of sharpened lighting
And eyes filled of night
Their Flags instill the fear of the end
And now we cannot fight

Lock up
Your Doors
And
Make sure that they are safe
Lock up
Your precious
and
Make sure they survive the quake
Now the
Time of
The end
will soon commence
Now a
never
ending rein of violence

FALL
FALL BEFORE THE
FALL
FALL BEFORE THE
FALL
FALL BEFORE THE
FALL

FALL BEFORE THE HOARDE

SERVE
THE
QUEEN
(im safe now)
SERVE
THE
QUEEN
(infest!)
SERVE
THE
QUEEN
(GATHER RAGE)
SERVE
THE
HOARDE
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Quote by BodaciousZac
"Noob can't even kill level 2 boars."
Originally Posted by clincher09
just might be testicular cancer, but I bet you'd give your left nut not to have cancer
#3
yes it tis the heaviest of thy metallll
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Quote by BodaciousZac
"Noob can't even kill level 2 boars."
Originally Posted by clincher09
just might be testicular cancer, but I bet you'd give your left nut not to have cancer
#4
i guess metal before i ever read the thing. hah that was actually pretty good. the fall before the fall thing. as simple at it is when reading it i could like heard it being sung. it had good rhythm to it in my head i hope it does in yours too. lol good flow in it. it was well written. could you crit mine?

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