#1
another by matt we are sharing this account so he will be posting some as well

please crit it if u have any helpfull suggestions


stitches

(Intro)
Girl: please just give me one more chance.
Guy: I’m not going to fall for you again I know what you’ll do.
Girl: what did I ever do to lose you……?


Take my heart and tear it to pieces
Give it back all filled with stitches
Just to steal it again and tear them out
I hope I don’t fall for you again…

But you always lore me back
I can’t understand,
If it’s you I love or the pain
That I feel when you lie

Understand this isn’t love
Remember its only lust
Months go with out a word
Oh well I guess it’s over any way
Moments pass where it’s all good
Then I realize you’re not there

Take my heart and tear it to pieces
Give it back all filled with stitches
Just to steal it again and rip them out
I won’t fall for you again…

You cheat on me, you steal from me
I’m true to you and fair to you
And when you need me I’m there for you

When you’re around you never listen
Everything I say you ignore
Then you complain when I do the same
What more can I say? But,

Take my heart and tear it to pieces
Give it back all filled with stitches
Just to steal it again and rip them out
I know I won’t fall for you again…
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#2
not bad. obviously some sort of girl in your life that plays with your heart. if you were writing about that then good job because i caught onto what it was about. ha

Take my heart and tear it to pieces
Give it back all filled with stitches

i especially liked that part it just seems to work. its kinda like dissanence with the two words that don't rhyme but almost do. this was well written and you got your point across very well. good job

crit mine?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=498410