I recorded only like the first minute or so of this song because I suck at guitar and can't play it consistant. Nevertheless, I was hoping to get some feedback on what I've conjured up so far. All input is greatly appreciated.

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hi, I love elliot smith. i don't have this song though, but it sounds pretty nice to me. do you play any other elliot smith songs? would love to hear. bye

Guitar work is tight, very cleanly played. Vocals sound just like elliot smith. In fact they sound exactly like Elliot Smith. I'm gonna have to go and listen to the original to make sure this isn't actually him lol!!!

Very well done. Can you crit my cover of heartbeats?? Just click my sig.