#1
Here is something I was writing and I thought it sounded like pop-punk at first, but really I haven't a clue. That does not mean that it is rubbish though, I think it's the second best thing I've written (out of everything that I have written, most of which I haven't posted here).
Attachments:
pop punkish thing (at first anyhow).zip
I like waffles

Please crit my EP!
#2
well, i dont know if it was pop-punk. To tell the truth i dont know what it is. there were some parts i liked and some parts i didnt. Most of the parts i didnt like were the transitions, like to the piano. if you just worked on the transitions it would make it alot better imo.