#1
Ok guys, its pretty simple, but I think its catchy. This is just the two verses. What do you think?

Grab my sector 9 , and I head out the door
Trip over one of my friends, whos passed out on the floor
I can feel the sun, god what time is it?
Last night must have been fun, damn I feel like shit.

Skate down to the taco shop, fill up on some food
Livin', lovin' life, what do I have to lose?
I can see you callin', hey, what could it be?
Baby its the weekend now, why dont you come with me?
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Last edited by Chadzilla at Jan 8, 2007,
#3
thanks man. Ill keep that in mind, but i feel it flows.

good song you have.

Any other feedback?
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