#1
.......a song i wrote this morning straight after i woke up. only a start but honest ideas/feelings please. feel free to add anything.

I didn't write you a ransom
Just for you to fake the leap
Really you weren't that handsome
Couldn't save yourself from falling so deep

Feels like we're disconnected
Silence should be respected
Apparently you're just misrepresented

Sweetened words to prove your innocence
Overcome by outgrown arrogance
Your eyes like vines, shadow your pain
Nothing to feel, nothing to gain.
#2
That'iss, very good'ah. I'm lik'n' the sophistication in th' lyrics. Good job, sist'ah!