#1
So, i've been working on a song, for some reason i just cant get it right.


so far i have like random parts written, so heres what i have so far.

(intro-ish thing)
lights out, hands cold, body shakin' again
cold veins, crashed planes, tonight, feel the midnight rain.

(verse so far)
cold stars, make hearts beat faster than before.
3 hours, then sun hits that line by the shore
can't take, can't take more of these closed doors

(CHORUS)
while the city sleeps, we'll rule these streets.
while the concrete weeps, we'll keep this beat(not so sure about that line)

i want one more line of chorus, one more to lead from verse to chorus, and i'll edit this when i have time cause i have the other verse kinda started.

any suggestions for those lines?