#1
this is a song my bandmate wrote, its got a faster blink 182 sound and i think it sucks and is too repetetive, do you?

nothing to tell
and there’s no one to listen
head full of thoughts
but i just don’t know what to say

i’m in a race
and i’m not sure the distance
i’m not lost
but i just don’t know the right way

can you help me
can you tell me
can you help me
tell me what i should say

can you tell me
can you help me
can you tell me
help me find the right way

i read the story
but i can’t find the lesson
i see the words
but i just don’t know what they say

can’t get the answer
if you don’t know the question
need black and white
but the whole world just seems so gray

can you help me
can you tell me
can you help me
tell me what the words say

can you tell me
can you help me
can you tell me
help me see through the gray
#2
personally, yea
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#4
meh, not bad.

EDIT: after seeing what pinkydemon said before me, i find that rather funny, considering my custom user title...
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#5
very cliché
the diction needs tons of works
ie try to show rather than tell
or at least tell in a way that's new and impressionable
go through and take each of the sentences and think of ways it can be reformed
either using metaphors, similies, whatever.
use more descriptive words to tighten the work
#7
I don't personally find it to be a good song - but I imagine your friend isnt an expert songwriter who writes crazy stuff with extremely descriptive lyrics and beautiful imagery and such normally.

I'd say it's average for starting but I wouldn't recommend using it as an actual song. I'd say write a few more tunes similar to it and find the best one. They should get progressivley better.