#1
heres my poem, still needs a name. feedback/tips appreciated. thanks.

Don't close your eyes
You can't hide your fear
When all love dies
Not all pain will clear

Oh aren't you aching?
See what solitude does to the heart
It's your happiness im taking
Blissful ignorance on your part

Silence should be respected
Already you were in too deep
I've been so affected
Couldn't bear to make the leap

Pause the scene
Oh, do you recall?
So young at fifteen
Did it even happen at all?

Don't close your eyes
I'm trying to forget you
When all love dies
I'm just passing through


Not sure about the very last line, any ideas?
#2
the last line should be "I'll still luh-uh-uuuve yooouuu

followed by an ooooooooh

and it should be called "lover time tonight"