#1
Crit for Crit Perhaps?
as usual it sounds better when played with music


When the Factories Seem Perfectly Aligned

Well I don’t got the money, I can’t get a cab
And I know everybody would call this bad luck but
I’m winding down from a trip to the top
And seems kinda pointless to keep this up if I can’t
Get away and I can’t ****in wait
To get out of the house just to change the pace
We’ve been waiting for weeks but I doubt there’s a road
Up ahead that’ll get me out of this hole

And it’s never gonna be the same
Honey I could never stay this way
We never thought it had to change
Funny how you’ll take back what you say
It’s never gonna be the same
There’s no place to take us tired but sane
It’s never gonna be the same
Don’t you know, we can’t escape?

And the streets stay the same while the weather is felt
But the snow on the sidewalk is starting to melt
In the heat of the morning the moment of dawn
As I stroll down this alleyway into the pub
And nobody’s laughing cause nobody’s there
Just a man with a rag who is losing his hair
And I can’t concentrate on the thoughts in my mind
And this drink isn’t helping to keep me kind

And it’s never gonna be the same
Honey I could never stay this way
We never thought it had to change
Funny how you’ll take back what you say
It’s never gonna be the same
There’s no place to take us tired but sane
It’s never gonna be the same
Don’t you know that it’s too late?

And it’s never gonna be the same
Honey I could never stay this way
We never thought it had to change
Funny how you’ll take back what you say
It’s never gonna be the same
There’s no place to take us tired but sane
It’s never gonna be the same
Don’t you know, don’t you know x3
That it’s too late
© 2006
Copyrighted Bitches!
Quote by B.I.N.
Chord of David, eh?
G Sus, perhaps?
#2
You're lil copyright sign is BS, unless you have a certificate behind it you'd stand no chance in court. Thats when you aquire the permission to use the symbol.

Anyway I'm here to advise you not to post your piece in others threads. Link them if they owe you a critique.

That is all.
Filth, pure filth... That's what you are.